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Monday, December 28, 2020

Publishing, Query Letters, and More

The other day, I was asked by a friend if I had any advice about getting novels published, or if I had any advice about using Amazon's Kindle Direct Publishing service. The question caught me a little off-guard, so I took a day to think about it before I sent back my answer. 

(Yes, I dabbled a bit in KDP publishing, but as of right now, I have decided that self-publishing is probably not the way that I want to go with my writing career. Lately, I have been researching and querying over the past few months. So far, my queries have been unsuccessful or I have never gotten a response.)


But as I was seriously thinking about the topic, a lot of different thoughts and useful tips that I have either gathered from experience, from writing professors, or from research popped into my mind, so I sat down and wrote a bunch of advice, trying to tell this person what I wish I had known much earlier as a writer. 

Since this blog was mainly started as an outlet for my writing and such, I figured I would post this (rather long) list of advice and explanations, just so that anyone who is thinking about publishing (whether traditionally or self-published) can have it for reference! 
In no particular order, here we go! 

#1. Know the different types of publishing. 

First, there is standard “traditional” publishing through an established publishing company, usually via a literary agent. Then there is Amazon’s KDP publishing, which, at the other end of the spectrum, is totally self-serve and self-published — no review process or editors or anything. Lastly, there are “hybrid” models. I’ve heard mixed reviews on those, though, so I would approach them with caution -- these are the websites that say "we'll publish your book! You can be in control, but we'll do the heavy lifting!" or that make you enter an email "if you're interested," prior to spamming you with eight emails a day. A lot of them claim to be “the best for your book if you don’t want to self-publish but don’t want to bother with agents and such,” and maybe that’s right for some people, but I tend to be wary of companies with few or no reviews by previous users. There's something that just doesn't feel right to me. 

#2. If traditional publishing is the way you want to go eventually, then your best bet is to first find a literary agent who knows how the technical aspect of communicating and making a deal with publishers works. 

A lot of agents work for specific publishers, so they have an “in” to get your work published after review and all that fun stuff. An agent will work with you to get your work published by a reputable company, making you a professional author, not a "self-published" one. As a writer who isn’t established in the field, try looking for a junior agent or an agent who is still building a list of people to represent! To find agents, simply Google publishing companies and their agents, read the bios, and send off emails or letters accordingly. It can be tricky and very intimidating, but hey, the worst that can happen is them saying "no" to you. You might as well try! Just stay away from querying to agents who represent big name authors -- you're not going to, as an unpublished writer, query to Stephen King's agent, if you know what I mean. 

(There was a book published this year called “Guide to Literary Agents 2020," which looks helpful! It looks like it gives you different agents and what they are looking for -- I would check your local library website for it and other similar resources! I'm guessing there'll be a 2021 version published soon.)

#3. Amazon or similar “self serve” publishing services are great if they have all you need! 

If you just want to be able to have copies to share with family and friends, or if you’re willing to be your own advertising campaign manager and constantly plug your works, then Amazon is great! It gives you total control over your formatting, editing, and publishing options, lets you publish ebooks and paperbacks, and isn't bad quality at all! I know that a lot of writers (especially those who got started as bloggers or writing fan fiction) succeed as self-published authors, mainly because they put a huge effort into advertising and promoting their stuff. But if being a recognized author is a goal (i.e. walking into Barnes and Noble to see your book on display), then using KDP is going to be a lot trickier in the endgame, even though it is easier to get started that way. 

#4. Write a query letter/pitch!!!! 

Even if you don’t send out queries to any agents and you decide to self-publish, condensing your book into one or two paragraphs (or less) is a valuable thing to be able to do. You need to have your story condensed so that when somebody asks "well, what's your book about?" you can explain without rambling on and on, losing their focus. I have taken a couple screenwriting courses, and learning about pitching a movie to a producer is really similar to the skills that a writer needs to pitch a book to an agent/publisher. You have to be able to explain WHY your story is a story worth an agent’s/publisher's time, or why that person browsing Amazon should buy your book and not one of the thousands of other self-published books. Without being snobbish, you have to say "my book is the best one you've seen today, and you should pick it up." Learning to do that takes time and practice! 

In addition, if you're querying agents, you can make slight changes to a basic query letter that speaks to the specific things that different agents look for. Maybe one is looking for character-driven stories, and another is looking for stories set in a futuristic world -- so if your story is both, then make sure to cater to those specifics. For the first agent, lean on the fact that it's character-driven, but for the second, lean on the futuristic setting. 

(If you have time, look up “the One-minute pitch” lecture by a screenwriter, Pilar Alessandra. It’s a great tool to compress your story into what’s really happening and what really matters -- hopefully it's available on the open web!) 

#5. Be patient. 

With Amazon:  you’ll have to be patient with the monotonous and dreadful self-editing and formatting nonsense. They have tools to help you, but to get it how you want your story to look, it takes a lot of trial and error and re-doing of things!  

With agents? They may not write you back in less than 3 months, if ever. I sent out four queries in March and have only heard back (a polite refusal) from one of them so far.

#6. Along with being patient, don’t be discouraged. 

Most agents aren’t sitting in their offices, cackling, rubbing their hands together, and saying "Mwahahaha, I’ll refuse this manuscript to spite this person!” No, they’re busy people who are just trying to do their job and put bread on the table for themselves and their families -- just like you. Maybe your story just didn’t vibe with them that day -- it doesn’t mean that your story is bad, just that you might not have the same tastes, or you might need to re-work how you're presenting the story. 

Save your refusal letters, don't trash them! Most authors aren’t accepted on the first try, or even the thirty-first try! Don’t get dragged down into a funk because you got refused by a few agents or even a hundred agents — these things happen to everyone. The key to becoming successful is to never give up trying. 

#7. If you’re sending queries (and I can't stress this enough), DO THE FORMATTING CORRECTLY!

Little things like spelling or punctuation errors, or clunky professional writing, can throw off an agent. As a student writer, I've done a lot of peer reviews, and it's incredibly difficult to see a good story or good ideas through a messy layer of technical issues -- it's a distraction, it seems super unprofessional, and detracts from the actual content of a story. 

Put the information in the letter that the agents ask for -- don't leave things out that they want, and don't go overboard on extras. Keep your tone professional and polite, but also strong. Also, as I mentioned earlier, different agents look for different info and details in your letter; make sure you read up on their submission requests and submit accordingly. 

#8. Last but not least, don’t give up!!! 

This is a TON of information (by no means comprehensive), and it looks overwhelming at first! Also, these are just my personal opinions, what I've found helpful, and maybe something totally opposite of what I've said will work better for you. By all means, work however works for you! 



If I can be of any further help, or if any of this needs more clarification, let me know! 

And always keep writing!!!!! :) 


I found this really helpful!




Monday, December 14, 2020

The Stationery Tag!

Hello Everyone!

As I am catching up on my blog posts, I remembered a tag that was forgotten! Quite a while back (like 9 months back, cough cough), the lovely Mem tagged me for the Stationery Tag !!!

Without further ado, I shall fill out the questions! (Sorry if the photos are a bit grainy, but I don't have a great camera on my phone...or a great camera, at all.) 



1. What's the most recent thing you've bought for your stash?

I think it would be these adorable little hedgehog notecards! I saw them in the store and just couldn't pass them up. :) 



2. What's your favorite notebook and favorite pencil/pen?

Oooh...tricky question...hmm...well, there are different types of favorites, ya know what I mean? But, overall, I think this notebook is my favorite. It's leather, very heavy and sturdy, and it's great for writing! I'll probably be able to fit a whole novel in it. 


As far as practical pens go, I really enjoy writing with TUL fine point black gel ink pens (these), but for the coolness factor, this one is my favorite! 

It's even got a little stand thingy!!


3. If you DIY your notebooks or pens, what's the best one you've done? (If you haven't, just tell us what you would DIY if you had the skillz.)

I have not DIYed any notebooks or pens... :(  But I've been knitting lately, and I saw a pattern for a notebook with a knitted cover, so I might try that someday! 

4. Do you have any cute erasers? If you do, let's see them!

Sadly, I don't... :( But that doesn't mean I don't WANT them!!!!

5. What's the piece of stationery you have but don't use because it's too nice?

Technically not stationery...but this Pride and Prejudice pen set is something that I love to have in my collection but I'm too scared to use...I don't want to mess it up!! 



6. And finally, show us your full stationery collection. If you want, you can even include numbers.



Ta daa!!! This probably isn't my full stash, but it's what I could find. Now that I'm married, it's really difficult to distinguish between my husband's stuff and mine sometimes...not to mention that some of my old stuff is in storage, so I couldn't give you an exact number if I wanted to! But that's it! 

Anyhoo, thanks for bearing with my many-month-late post, Mem and everyone else! Since it was so late, I'm not tagging anybody, but I did enjoy this post! 

TTFN! :) 

Friday, March 20, 2020

Confusing Times


Me now that my classes are all online

As much as I hate to contribute to the general panic about *whispers* coronavirus, it's kind of a historic
moment in our lives right now, and I want to have some record of it for all posterity. 

Plus, I'm behind on blog posts. 

I have a couple tags that I am planning to get to SOON, so I apologize to those who have tagged me...but the posts are in the works, I promise! 

So, what have I been up to lately? Well, mostly school and work, which is why my posts are few and far between these days. Now, however, my classes have converted to fully online, so I'm still doing homework, etc., but I have a lot more time to just sit around and work on things I want to do -- such as blogging. I also work at a public library, so they have closed down until further notice, which means I am out of a job. 

My husband and I have also been researching blog platforms and such, and he just found out yesterday that any content one posts on the Blogger platform is not actually the blogger's property anymore; it now belongs to Google should they decide that they want it. In light of that, I have gone ahead and removed any of my own writings (short stories and poems) from this platform, not because I'm paranoid, but just because I don't like the thought that Google could steal them. (Not that they would...but you know.) I'm super sorry about this if you wanted to read any, but...you know. 

In the same vein, I recently started re-writing (and by re-writing, I mean that I opened a NEW WORD DOCUMENT and started RE-WRITING) my previously self-published book.....and I'm planning to start seeking a literary agent to pursue traditional publishing. (Perhaps.) So, because of this, I have taken down the information (or most of it) under my "Writing" tab on this blog, as well as discontinued the sale of my Amazon self-published book. 

But! 

Things are not so bleak as they seem. Even with the threat of enforced quarantine (ironically in America, land of the free and home of the brave, though I'm not going to get political here), we should not panic, we should not go into chaos mode, we should not, in other words, go buy all the food and toilet paper that we can. Sharing and helping each other is important, as is common sense. But I don't want to talk about this anymore, and I'm sure you're just as sick of hearing about it as I am. 

Personally, I'm just hoping that more time at home gives me more time to write! :D And possibly do some blog work. I also had time to peruse an antique store, where I found this amazing action figure still in the packaging! (Totally not a waste of money...) 




As a final note, any thoughts about my new blog design? It's still in process, but I thought it was about time for a change. :) 



Monday, June 24, 2019

The Star Wars Character Tag!!!




Well, as you can probably tell, this post is a filling out of the Star Wars Character Tag, for which I was tagged by the lovely MiddleEarthMusician a while ago! According to rule #4, the "Sorta Rule," I need to treat her to a pizza dinner at my favorite pizza chain, so here are some Lego stormtroopers delivering your dinner, Mem!!! 

(photo from Pinterest)

Now here we go! 

The rules…

1. THERE ARE NO RULES.
2. Refer To Number 1.
3. There is one absolute rule: You MUST use your own characters (OCs) for this tag. (Brownie points if you add pictures of your characters.)
4. The Sorta Rule: Scream a huge thank you to whoever tagged you for this whilst treating them to a pizza dinner at your favorite pizza chain. 
5. The Kinda Rule: Include This Link In The Post So That The Penny Can Read Everyone’s Answers To This Smol Strange Tag: https://asouthernbellewithstoriestotell.wordpress.com/2019/02/18/the-star-wars-character-tag-i-made-my-own-tag-halp/
6. The Rule That’s Not Really A Rule But It Would Be Great: Include The Graphic and Tag at Least Three Jedi or Sith Lords.



#1 Who’s your Obi-Wan Kenobi? (sassy, a great mentor, but can be a bit strict)

Lehye'ahl, I think...he's a little more of a jerk (okay, a LOT more of a jerk) than Obi-Wan, but  he's definitely sassy and strict. He would also be a great mentor (if he had anyone to mentor, that is, most of the people he could have mentored died, hehehehe). 





#2 Who’s your Leia Organa? (feisty, incredible comebacks, does their own thing)

Dehmatthir...he totally fits all of those categories.





#3 Who’s your Finn? (overeager, adorable, cinnamon roll)

Lutea Coggins (who I have a picture for but have not officially "cast" yet). She is a small person filled with the cheeriest personality ever and can also be TOO bubbly at times...however she will not hesitate to Fight You to defend her friends or family. 



#4 Who’s your Padme? (kind, loving, but also kickbutt)

Jorgen, a young and gentle dwarf who smiles a lot but has excellent skills. He hates fighting but does it when necessary, and is also a great cook.





#5 Who’s your Count Dooku? (deliciously evil, extra, and sick burns)

Well...I don't know...none of my villains really fit that category. None of my characters at ALL fit that category....*frowns* I need more villains, apparently. *making a note to work on that* 

#6 Who’s your BB-8? (too cute, everyone loves them, can do no wrong)

Darot...now, this little fellow experienced a great deal of emotional and psychological trauma at a young age and never really recovered from it (that sounds super insensitive and rude to say, but it's true). He has remained a living ray of sunshine and childlike happiness in all of his friends' lives. 




#7 Who’s your Yoda? (underestimated, extra, wise)

Amris...this elf...is too smart for his own good. He knows something about everything and is always ready with some sort of an answer for any question. 



#8 Who’s your Anakin Skywalker?  (bratty, rebellious, whiny)

Eyellyn. This character is a female dwarf who is somewhat the guardian and parent figure to her younger siblings. She can be extremely grumpy, rebellious, and isn't much for giving her companions explanations or information. She doesn't Whine so much as Complain, but you know, it's close enough. 



#9 Who’s your C3-PO? (always worrying, gives depressing information, constantly wailing)

Colderan, definitely! He doesn't MEAN to be a Nervous Nellie, but he has a very soft heart and doesn't want anyone to get hurt. This of course means that warnings come very often from him and he has to make sure that everyone knows the odds. 




#10 Who’s your Luke Skywalker? (hero, has been through a lot, has their share of flaws)

Prince Rhondin!! He is one of my favorite main characters, a young man who....well...he goes through a lot. But somehow he still stays cheerful and bright throughout it all. :) :) 



Bonus #11 which I have made up to add since my answer for #5 was pathetic: Who's your Han Solo? (calls people "kid," has traveled, "I'm making this up as I go" 
planning)

Ateke, who is an elf and a great friend (and brother-in-law) of the aforementioned Lehye'ahl. However, they are totally different personality-wise and it's kind of surprising that they get along...(oh also I've decided that he would be excellent played by Elijah Wood)



Well, that was fun! :D Thank you so much again, Mem!!!! Ah yes, and as far as tagging goes...hmmmmmmmmm....literally anybody who wants to do this tag. If you own a toy lightsaber, consider yourself tagged!!!!! 



Sunday, February 10, 2019

“We Work By Wit And Not By Witchcraft”

Hello everyone!!! Today is the opening day of the We Love Shakespeare Week, hosted by Hamlette of Hamlette's Soliloquy! Many thanks for hosting, Hamlette! :D This is going to be wonderfully fun. Now, without any more rambling introduction (because goodness knows this post is much longer and rambly-er than it needs to be already), here we go. My topic today is the character Iago, from Shakespeare's play Othello. I have not seen any full movie productions of this play, just so you know, just read the text, so this is what I got from that. *There are spoilers in this post, just so you know.*

(Don't know whose artwork this is, but I like it a lot)

Iago, from the play Othello, is honestly my favorite Shakespeare villain. He is a deceitful, treacherous man, who uses each person he knows for his own personal gain, but he operates with such Class and Cleverness that's it's impossible not to feel just a LITTLE bit of respect for his character.

So, a little background, for a brief synopsis of the play:

Othello is a Moor, which is basically Shakespearian for a person of color, and, TO GIVE YOU FAIR WARNING, the play has a loooooot of racist content going on. He is also the leader of an army, which is kind of where his "identity" as a character is found, in warring and in leading his army. He elopes with Desdemona, the daughter of a wealthy, white noble, and then they go off together to the place where the next battle is, along with his army, second-in-command Cassio, and Iago, the standard-bearer and advisor.

Not long after that, their enemies are defeated. The war is over and there's nothing else in anybody's way. And the army starts partying and kind of just chilling while Iago's devious plots are put into action. In the end *SPOILER ALERT EVEN THOUGH THE BOOK'S LIKE 500 YEARS OLD* Iago convinces Othello that Desdemona is unfaithful, Othello kills her, then Emilia (Iago's wife and Desdemona's maid) deducts that Iago is the villain, then Iago kills her, then Othello kills himself, and Iago is carried off to prison. The End.



Now, with that background, let's talk about Iago's actual character. His main reason for the grudge against and hatred of Othello, his commander, is that some dude named Cassio got the promotion to second-in-command instead of him, and now he wants revenge. Naturally. And not revenge on Cassio! Revenge on Othello, for not picking him.

Weirdly enough, Iago isn't physically aggressive throughout most of the play, which is somewhat strange for such a terrible villain.  He isn't killing people left and right like other Shakespeare villains, and really, it's through  his use and command of language that he is essentially the play’s “director” and the main instigator of most action in the play, or at least I think so. 

In fact, Iago’s verbal, emotional, and mental manipulation of pretty much everyone he meets engineers the entire play’s plot! From the very beginning, he is there (in fact his are the opening lines), orchestrating events and exerting his will on those surrounding him. 

His skills are mainly these: 

  1. Planting small seeds of ideas in his listener’s mind, not EXPLICITLY stating his purpose or point, but saying enough to make the hearer think, "wait a minute...something's strange here," and then claim the idea as their own, in a way. Interestingly enough, many of Iago’s “seeds” of ideas are not full, blatant lies. He's an expert at twisting the truth juuuuuuust enough to change peoples’ perceptions of reality, just enough to skew their sight and make them think the way he wants them to think.
  2. He's  REALLY good at painting word pictures so that his listener can see in their brain exactly what he wants them to see, glazed in the light that he wants them to see it in. 
  3. Basically, he's tricky with words and not somebody you'd want to have any sort of debate with.  Cause you (if you're anything like me) would probably end up losing. 
The reason that he is such a compelling and believable villain is (I think) because Iago is also an excellent actor. People (such as Othello) constantly call him "Honest Iago" or "Loyal Iago" or such terms, and many of the characters even look up to him as a mentor and adviser, constantly bringing their worries and fears to him for resolution. But of course, Iago never gives pure advice or honesty; in fact he is a two-faced, treacherous, equivocating man. 

"Iago doth give up the execution of his wit, hands, heart to wronged Othello’s service! Let him command, and to obey shall be in me remorse what bloody business ever,” he says as he kneels and pledges fealty to Othello.  Buuuuuuut then as soon as Othello leaves, Iago basically never stops hating on “the Moor." (He is also INCREDIBLY and disgustingly racist. The language of race is used constantly throughout the play and, through that, Iago makes Othello seem like an animalistic, "othered" being, almost inhuman and monstrous. It's pretty awful, but that's a topic for another time.) 

"I follow him to serve my turn upon him,” Iago states, as well as claiming, “In following him, I follow but myself." In the same monologue as these statements, he acknowledges his own two-faced, scheming, conniving, treacherous nature: “I am not what I am."  This is the voice of a terrible, evil liar. It is also the direct opposite of what God told Moses, definitely, in my opinion, giving Iago a devillish and almost demonic character. “When devils will the blackest sins put on, they do suggest at first with heavenly shows as I do now,” he says, taking pride in his lying and his evil.  

So anyway, Iago is really the one orchestrating the entire play. He grows his control of and influence on his companions and their actions throughout the whole thing, until he is found out and admits his crimes. The weird thing is that after his evil plots and manipulations are discovered, he just says, “Demand me nothing. What you know, you know. From this time forth I never will speak word." 

And that's literally the last thing he ever says. He has no more lines after that, even when the others talk about sending him to be imprisoned and/or tortured. He doesn't even defend himself or try to fight, which *I* found super odd.  The play actually ends about seventy lines after Iago’s last line. Since he wasn't manipulating and directing people anymore, the action sort of winds down after that line, which is super weird.

I think my favorite part of the play might be when Iago is getting Othello to suspect Cassio (a high-ranking officer who, by the way, stole Iago's promotion, or so the villain says) of being a little too close with Othello's wife, Desdemona. The four are standing there talking, Desdemona says something to Cassio, and Iago says, "Ha, I like not that.” (This is in Act III, if you're interested.) Later, after Cassio and Desdemona go their separate ways, Othello starts prying at what Iago disliked. "Why dost thou ask?" Othello says, with Iago's reply of, "But for a satisfaction of my thought. No further harm." In other words, Othello says, "Hey, what's going on?" and Iago says, "Oh, it's nothing. No big deal."

I find this HILARIOUS because it's basically the exact same conversation that I have with my siblings when they won't tell me something or vice versa. "THOU DOST MEAN SOMETHING!!!" (The caps are my addition...) For like five pages, Othello and Iago go back and forth about whether it's important, and Othello becomes somewhat frustrated with his "honest Iago." After several pages of banter, Iago finally, "reluctantly," tells Othello his thoughts, being careful to say "wellllll, I can't be sure, but have you noticed how friendly those two are with each other??" This is also the passage with the famous "jealousy" lines, where Iago warns against the very thing that he is (which is another interesting note, whenever Iago describes a "bad" person, or describes what to "beware," he basically just describes himself). 

(Yes, that is an Iago line, NOT a Loki line. Yes, I agree with the common consensus that Loki's whole character is very similar to Iago's, at least in some ways. But that's not the point. It would be an interesting topic...but not now!) 

The point is, that personally I think Shakespeare was pointing out the significance and impact of words. “But words are words. I never yet did hear that the bruised heart was pierced through the ear.” This line (spoken by Desdemona's father after he discovers her elopement) is pretty much the Shakespearian equivalent of “sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me.” BUT the rest of the play proves the saying completely wrong as Iago’s manipulation wreaks havoc and disarray. (Her dad even dies later because he was sad, further disproving his words.) Words are POWERFUL and can be harmful if used in the wrong way, as Iago's character proves. 

Oh, Iago knows very well that he is evil, a “devil,” but he does not seem to care as long as he does evil well.  He bends and twists the truth, the very embodiment of evil, but not regretful for his evil ever after he gets caught. He is truly one of the most effective, intelligent, and powerful villains in classic literature, I think. Probably the thing that makes him so compelling is his belief in his own lies, the way that he will stop at absolutely nothing because he absolutely believes that he is right. It's almost scary, actually.  



That line, "And what's he...that says I play the villain?" kind of sums up his entire character. It's kind of surprising how well fleshed-out and intricate it is! Not that Shakespeare's characters are all shallow, but in my reading of his works, I haven't yet encountered such an interesting character. Yes, he's awful and evil. But he is human. 

(That being said, it's not impossible that *some* of his anger against Othello was justified, because [according to Iago himself] there were rumors afoot that Othello and Emilia, Iago's wife, had had an affair and Iago was jealous for her...not an excuse for his awful behavior, but a reason nonetheless.) 

But, even with his evilness and awfulness (because I'm not saying I like him, that would be perverted and wrong), he is a fascinating character to study. The play's title is Othello. But Othello is not the main character. 

All right, I think I have rambled for long enough here! Before I go though...has anyone read the book I, Iago by Nicole Galland? And if you have, is it any good? It happened to come up when I was researching the play and I was wondering if it's worth reading at all. 

Well, thanks again for letting me participate, Hamlette! This was very enjoyable! :) 

Happy Shakespeare Week, everybody! 

Saturday, December 15, 2018

Introducing...the Characters that Fill My Brain, Part 5: King Colderan


Well, that's what I've been doing, folks. Although I suppose I DO have an excuse! The semester was wrapping up for me over these past couple weeks, and today I officially finished my last final of the fall 2018 semester! Phew! Anyway, it's nice to have that done. I haven't been as "in-tune" with the blogging world because of that, but over the break there are a couple tag posts that I need to get done, and I hope to have more time for reading and commenting too! 

But, back to the subject. Today is the last day of my character post series, wrapping up with the last (and chronologically oldest) of the main characters. I really like this guy--he's so nice...but anyway, here it is! I would like to introduce you to King Colderan! 


Age: 
Depends on which book you're reading. In his "solo" book, (wherein he is the main character), he is mainly in his mid/late twenties. In later books, he is older, and by the time of my main trilogy, he has been long dead. (It's not really a spoiler...I mean, even for an elf, that would be really old.) 

Appearance/"Casting": 

His dark hair (now streaked with the smallest tinge of gray) contrasted with his son’s fair locks, and he had soft, gentle brown eyes that sparkled gold in the light.  His back was always straight, his head always high, though not in an arrogant way.  Because of an injury from a year ago, he now walked with a heavy limp, but he didn't complain or seem to pity himself.

As far as "casting" goes, I sort of imagine Colderan (as an older person) to look a little bit like Ben Miles, the actor who portrays Sir Timothy Midwinter in Lark Rise to Candleford. (*Naturally I don't approve of all the stuff that he or any other actor I have mentioned is in, but, setting that aside, I think he looks somewhat like Colderan*)

Family:

A wife and two children (one of which is Lehye'ahl), many siblings who he was never very close to, and parents he was never close to. 

Friends:  

His closest friend, named Amris, is a very intelligent and skilled elf, who is a genius at math and pretty much everything else. Colderan and his wife were also good friends with several people of different races, including a dwarf-girl and a member of the first royal family of Bdellith (this was centuries before Rhondin's time, however). 

Skills (or Un-Skills): 

Colderan is very good with words and is a skilled public speaker, as well as a good writer. He often gets lost in thought, and could be described as a "dreamer." With that personality, he can sometimes drift away and forget what other people are saying, but he never intends to be rude. He can be stubborn and argumentative when he wants, but only about things that are extremely important to him. He is trained to use a sword but he hates it, and he is skilled at horseback riding. Colderan is a problem solver, but unfortunately many problems that he faces are not ones he can solve. He can be overzealous at times in his efforts to comfort people, and, when he was younger, was a bit naive about how to think before speaking. 

"Well, all of those stars are up there—I’m not sure how to say this—but isn’t it amazing that we’re a part of the same world, the same…same universe, I suppose—that every single star is a part of?  No matter how big or important we think we are, there’s always something out there that reminds us that we really aren’t that big after all.” 

Fears:

Losing the ones that he loves. He is terrified of storms at sea (after several awful experiences which I'm not going to tell you about) and hates watching people climb around in the rigging, just in case they happened to fall. 

Loves (or Likes, I suppose): 

Being with his loved ones. Being at peace with all the races in the land and seeing his own people willing to form friendships with others. He loves sweet, warm drinks (especially hot cocoa), and is a huge fan of his friend's mother's chicken dumpling soup. He likes comfortable clothes and being able to slip his shoes off while working in his office, and overall loves it when his people show honest, true care for each other.

Five words/phrases that describe this character's personality 
(to prevent me from rambling any more):

Kind. Gentle. Courageous. Forgiving. Strong-hearted.

“Why must we distrust them?  Why can we not become allies and friends?”  Colderan stood in a small tent, a little spot of shade for working elves that had been appropriated for him and his father to speak in private.
          “They are of different races, Colderan—not just of a different land, they are completely different than us.  I would hesitate even to call them ‘people;’ ‘creatures’ is a more accurate word.”  
          Colderan began to pace heatedly about the tent.  “Father, they are just exactly like us.  They are people as well, every bit as intelligent as we are, though perhaps in different ways.  They simply look a little different—even though they do things rather differently than we do, they're really, on the inside, the same.  I would bet that the dwarves are just the same as us.” 


Songs that remind me of this character 
(for any reason, this does not mean that I necessarily support or agree with the musical group, and nor does it mean that the song is EXACTLY like my character, it may have several lines that are "right" or could just have the right "feel."): 

Burlap to Cashmere: "Closer to the Edge", "Other Country"

The Neal Morse Band: "Breath of Angels"

And Lastly...a collage!




Sunday, November 25, 2018

Introducing...The Characters that Fill My Brain, Part 4: King Lehye'ahl

Ah, now, here we go...after much procrastinating, here is the fourth part of my "character introduction" blog series! Today I shall introduce you to a man--well, elf-man--by the name of Lehye'ahl (pronounced lee-HI-all). Oh, forgive me, it's KING Lehye'ahl. And don't you forget it. But anyway, let us begin! 


Age: 

Hahahaha, very old. He has been around for literally over a hundred years--his father (who I will talk about in the next post) was the elf who was the first real king on their new continent. But enough history lessons. Suffice it to say that Lehye'ahl is very old during the trilogy, although in the prequels that focus on him and his father, he was much younger, even shown as a child. 

Appearance/"Casting": 

Okay, so, quite a while ago, my cousin and I were talking about writing and she said, "Hey, you know that guy in War Horse who dies? Captain Nichols? He looks like the elf-king in your book." At that point, I stared at her in amazement, for she was right! I had no idea who the guy was at that point, but he absolutely looked like Lehye'ahl. So, now I actually know who he is...as you can probably tell from my collages, the *real* person who I think looks most like Lehye'ahl is the actor Tom Hiddleston. (*disclaimer #1*: This is not because, as my brothers might have teased back then, I think he's "hot"...come on, I'm ENGAGED for goodness' sake! It's literally because of that time my cousin pointed it out to me--he looks like Lehye'ahl and might be able to portray him very well. I can appreciate an actor's talents and be shocked that they resemble one of the characters that I made up, before even knowing about them, without being obsessed by them thank you very much *disclaimer #2*: I had not seen any Marvel movies when I realized the uncanny resemblance, and I had written all of Lehye'ahl's story already, so in no ways am I copying Loki--I had all this made up before I even knew Loki existed.)

He certainly hadn’t expected Lehye'ahl to seem so—well, so young. The elf’s silver hair was smooth and long, held back by a silver circlet.  His face held few signs of age, and the several lines and creases upon it seemed to have been carved in stone.  The icy blue eyes were pure and clear, radiating enigmatic intelligence.  Even the man’s posture and expression were intimidating as he sat at his grand desk, fingertips pressed together, elbows leaning on the desk with his posture formidably correct.  He watched them approach without a word, his mouth set in a tight, small frown, though it was hard to tell if he was frowning purposely or not.  Oh, King Lehye’ahl knew very well that he outranked them, and he wasn’t afraid to show it. 

Family:

Lemme just say I have a thing for tragic backstories, okay? This is an important part of Lehye'ahl's character, though. Without what happened with his family years ago, he would not be the person he is in the trilogy. He had a father, mother, brother, wife, and two children, but by the time of the second book in the trilogy, these have all died of mostly tragic causes. (*maniacal laughter*) He has two remaining grandchildren, however, who are good friends with AllynRhondin, and Dehmatthir. Lehye'ahl is very protective of his family, protective to the point of being controlling and demanding. He also blatantly plays favorites with his two grandsons, Esril and Daeor, and likes to make them feel guilty whenever they come short of his idea of perfection. 

“Call him sir,” said Esril.  “Even his grandchildren call him sir.”
            “You haven’t even told us his name yet,” protested Allyn.  
            “His name,” Esril replied, “is Lehye’ahl.  And no, I can’t spell it for you.  But be sure to stick ‘king’ before it if you ever use the actual name.  You know, he actually isn’t such a bad guy usually.”
            “What with being overbearing and all,” said Allyn, raising an eyebrow. 
            “No, really, he can be reasonable when he wants to, he is very smart, and all in all, he’s a good person.  He’s just very critical of outsiders.  A little bit of a racist, I suppose.  
He’s had a rather tragic life in the past, so that explains his grim behavior.”

Friends:  

When he was younger, his wife's brother was Lehye'ahl's good friend. Unfortunately, there was an accident, and after that they sort of stopped talking. His old friend is still alive, but he is confined to his room, which Lehye'ahl doesn't like to think about (sadly, interacting with disabled people makes him uncomfortable), so they never see each other or talk any more. However, his friend's son is Lehye'ahl's office assistant, taking over his father's place. They are not nearly as close as the first two were, though. 

Skills (or Un-Skills): 

Lehye'ahl has a way with words and knows how to use them to his advantage. He is an amazing swordsman, in his own style, and is also good at hand-to-hand combat; he likes to punch things (and people, when he gets the excuse to). He is good at controlling people, but he is a decent king and, for the most part, is good to his people and his country. He was an avid reader in his youth and is very intelligent as well. He can't cook to save his life, however, and as far as practical manual labor goes, he is somewhat inexperienced.

The dwarf-king’s mouth twitched.  
“Those who do not admit to tricking their enemies are the ones who most often do,” he said.
          “Those who do admit to tricking their enemies have no qualms about it and will certainly do it again without hesitation,” said Lehye’ahl. 
            
Fears:

Not much. He isn't really "scared" of anything. (Or if he is, he doesn't let anyone, ANYONE, know that he is.) I guess I could include his weaknesses here, instead of "fears." He can be very cruel and mean at times, but underneath it all he is very lonely and he misses his family; all the people that he has lost. He doesn't allow anyone under that tough skin, which could be a part of his grieving process or whatever, but is certainly not good for his emotional/mental state. He HATES dwarves, absolutely hates them, after a really unfortunate misunderstanding between him and a previous king of the dwarves back when he was younger. That led to him cursing their entire race, and...well, suffice it to say that ever since they caused him such pain and personal trouble, he has grown to despise anyone who thinks differently than him and has the courage to speak up about it. 

“I hate you.  I hate you and all your offspring, and every dwarf who has sat here listening to you and letting me die.  I will never come to terms with you, and so help me I will wipe your race from the land forever."

Loves (or Likes, I suppose): 

To have his own way. Obedience. Having the last word in an argument. Perfect new quill pens and unwrinkled paper. His family, in his own weird and awful way. Himself and his ego.

Five words/phrases that describe this character's personality 
(to prevent me from rambling any more):

Stern. Controlling. Over-protective. Refined. Selfish. 

Songs that remind me of this character 
(for any reason, this does not mean that I necessarily support or agree with the musical group, and nor does it mean that the song is EXACTLY like my character, it may have several lines that are "right" or could just have the right "feel."): 





(I apologize cause this is a really odd and quirky video, but the song fits)

And Lastly...a collage!