Showing posts with label My Books. Show all posts
Showing posts with label My Books. Show all posts

Monday, December 28, 2020

Publishing, Query Letters, and More

The other day, I was asked by a friend if I had any advice about getting novels published, or if I had any advice about using Amazon's Kindle Direct Publishing service. The question caught me a little off-guard, so I took a day to think about it before I sent back my answer. 

(Yes, I dabbled a bit in KDP publishing, but as of right now, I have decided that self-publishing is probably not the way that I want to go with my writing career. Lately, I have been researching and querying over the past few months. So far, my queries have been unsuccessful or I have never gotten a response.)


But as I was seriously thinking about the topic, a lot of different thoughts and useful tips that I have either gathered from experience, from writing professors, or from research popped into my mind, so I sat down and wrote a bunch of advice, trying to tell this person what I wish I had known much earlier as a writer. 

Since this blog was mainly started as an outlet for my writing and such, I figured I would post this (rather long) list of advice and explanations, just so that anyone who is thinking about publishing (whether traditionally or self-published) can have it for reference! 
In no particular order, here we go! 

#1. Know the different types of publishing. 

First, there is standard “traditional” publishing through an established publishing company, usually via a literary agent. Then there is Amazon’s KDP publishing, which, at the other end of the spectrum, is totally self-serve and self-published — no review process or editors or anything. Lastly, there are “hybrid” models. I’ve heard mixed reviews on those, though, so I would approach them with caution -- these are the websites that say "we'll publish your book! You can be in control, but we'll do the heavy lifting!" or that make you enter an email "if you're interested," prior to spamming you with eight emails a day. A lot of them claim to be “the best for your book if you don’t want to self-publish but don’t want to bother with agents and such,” and maybe that’s right for some people, but I tend to be wary of companies with few or no reviews by previous users. There's something that just doesn't feel right to me. 

#2. If traditional publishing is the way you want to go eventually, then your best bet is to first find a literary agent who knows how the technical aspect of communicating and making a deal with publishers works. 

A lot of agents work for specific publishers, so they have an “in” to get your work published after review and all that fun stuff. An agent will work with you to get your work published by a reputable company, making you a professional author, not a "self-published" one. As a writer who isn’t established in the field, try looking for a junior agent or an agent who is still building a list of people to represent! To find agents, simply Google publishing companies and their agents, read the bios, and send off emails or letters accordingly. It can be tricky and very intimidating, but hey, the worst that can happen is them saying "no" to you. You might as well try! Just stay away from querying to agents who represent big name authors -- you're not going to, as an unpublished writer, query to Stephen King's agent, if you know what I mean. 

(There was a book published this year called “Guide to Literary Agents 2020," which looks helpful! It looks like it gives you different agents and what they are looking for -- I would check your local library website for it and other similar resources! I'm guessing there'll be a 2021 version published soon.)

#3. Amazon or similar “self serve” publishing services are great if they have all you need! 

If you just want to be able to have copies to share with family and friends, or if you’re willing to be your own advertising campaign manager and constantly plug your works, then Amazon is great! It gives you total control over your formatting, editing, and publishing options, lets you publish ebooks and paperbacks, and isn't bad quality at all! I know that a lot of writers (especially those who got started as bloggers or writing fan fiction) succeed as self-published authors, mainly because they put a huge effort into advertising and promoting their stuff. But if being a recognized author is a goal (i.e. walking into Barnes and Noble to see your book on display), then using KDP is going to be a lot trickier in the endgame, even though it is easier to get started that way. 

#4. Write a query letter/pitch!!!! 

Even if you don’t send out queries to any agents and you decide to self-publish, condensing your book into one or two paragraphs (or less) is a valuable thing to be able to do. You need to have your story condensed so that when somebody asks "well, what's your book about?" you can explain without rambling on and on, losing their focus. I have taken a couple screenwriting courses, and learning about pitching a movie to a producer is really similar to the skills that a writer needs to pitch a book to an agent/publisher. You have to be able to explain WHY your story is a story worth an agent’s/publisher's time, or why that person browsing Amazon should buy your book and not one of the thousands of other self-published books. Without being snobbish, you have to say "my book is the best one you've seen today, and you should pick it up." Learning to do that takes time and practice! 

In addition, if you're querying agents, you can make slight changes to a basic query letter that speaks to the specific things that different agents look for. Maybe one is looking for character-driven stories, and another is looking for stories set in a futuristic world -- so if your story is both, then make sure to cater to those specifics. For the first agent, lean on the fact that it's character-driven, but for the second, lean on the futuristic setting. 

(If you have time, look up “the One-minute pitch” lecture by a screenwriter, Pilar Alessandra. It’s a great tool to compress your story into what’s really happening and what really matters -- hopefully it's available on the open web!) 

#5. Be patient. 

With Amazon:  you’ll have to be patient with the monotonous and dreadful self-editing and formatting nonsense. They have tools to help you, but to get it how you want your story to look, it takes a lot of trial and error and re-doing of things!  

With agents? They may not write you back in less than 3 months, if ever. I sent out four queries in March and have only heard back (a polite refusal) from one of them so far.

#6. Along with being patient, don’t be discouraged. 

Most agents aren’t sitting in their offices, cackling, rubbing their hands together, and saying "Mwahahaha, I’ll refuse this manuscript to spite this person!” No, they’re busy people who are just trying to do their job and put bread on the table for themselves and their families -- just like you. Maybe your story just didn’t vibe with them that day -- it doesn’t mean that your story is bad, just that you might not have the same tastes, or you might need to re-work how you're presenting the story. 

Save your refusal letters, don't trash them! Most authors aren’t accepted on the first try, or even the thirty-first try! Don’t get dragged down into a funk because you got refused by a few agents or even a hundred agents — these things happen to everyone. The key to becoming successful is to never give up trying. 

#7. If you’re sending queries (and I can't stress this enough), DO THE FORMATTING CORRECTLY!

Little things like spelling or punctuation errors, or clunky professional writing, can throw off an agent. As a student writer, I've done a lot of peer reviews, and it's incredibly difficult to see a good story or good ideas through a messy layer of technical issues -- it's a distraction, it seems super unprofessional, and detracts from the actual content of a story. 

Put the information in the letter that the agents ask for -- don't leave things out that they want, and don't go overboard on extras. Keep your tone professional and polite, but also strong. Also, as I mentioned earlier, different agents look for different info and details in your letter; make sure you read up on their submission requests and submit accordingly. 

#8. Last but not least, don’t give up!!! 

This is a TON of information (by no means comprehensive), and it looks overwhelming at first! Also, these are just my personal opinions, what I've found helpful, and maybe something totally opposite of what I've said will work better for you. By all means, work however works for you! 



If I can be of any further help, or if any of this needs more clarification, let me know! 

And always keep writing!!!!! :) 


I found this really helpful!




Monday, June 24, 2019

The Star Wars Character Tag!!!




Well, as you can probably tell, this post is a filling out of the Star Wars Character Tag, for which I was tagged by the lovely MiddleEarthMusician a while ago! According to rule #4, the "Sorta Rule," I need to treat her to a pizza dinner at my favorite pizza chain, so here are some Lego stormtroopers delivering your dinner, Mem!!! 

(photo from Pinterest)

Now here we go! 

The rules…

1. THERE ARE NO RULES.
2. Refer To Number 1.
3. There is one absolute rule: You MUST use your own characters (OCs) for this tag. (Brownie points if you add pictures of your characters.)
4. The Sorta Rule: Scream a huge thank you to whoever tagged you for this whilst treating them to a pizza dinner at your favorite pizza chain. 
5. The Kinda Rule: Include This Link In The Post So That The Penny Can Read Everyone’s Answers To This Smol Strange Tag: https://asouthernbellewithstoriestotell.wordpress.com/2019/02/18/the-star-wars-character-tag-i-made-my-own-tag-halp/
6. The Rule That’s Not Really A Rule But It Would Be Great: Include The Graphic and Tag at Least Three Jedi or Sith Lords.



#1 Who’s your Obi-Wan Kenobi? (sassy, a great mentor, but can be a bit strict)

Lehye'ahl, I think...he's a little more of a jerk (okay, a LOT more of a jerk) than Obi-Wan, but  he's definitely sassy and strict. He would also be a great mentor (if he had anyone to mentor, that is, most of the people he could have mentored died, hehehehe). 





#2 Who’s your Leia Organa? (feisty, incredible comebacks, does their own thing)

Dehmatthir...he totally fits all of those categories.





#3 Who’s your Finn? (overeager, adorable, cinnamon roll)

Lutea Coggins (who I have a picture for but have not officially "cast" yet). She is a small person filled with the cheeriest personality ever and can also be TOO bubbly at times...however she will not hesitate to Fight You to defend her friends or family. 



#4 Who’s your Padme? (kind, loving, but also kickbutt)

Jorgen, a young and gentle dwarf who smiles a lot but has excellent skills. He hates fighting but does it when necessary, and is also a great cook.





#5 Who’s your Count Dooku? (deliciously evil, extra, and sick burns)

Well...I don't know...none of my villains really fit that category. None of my characters at ALL fit that category....*frowns* I need more villains, apparently. *making a note to work on that* 

#6 Who’s your BB-8? (too cute, everyone loves them, can do no wrong)

Darot...now, this little fellow experienced a great deal of emotional and psychological trauma at a young age and never really recovered from it (that sounds super insensitive and rude to say, but it's true). He has remained a living ray of sunshine and childlike happiness in all of his friends' lives. 




#7 Who’s your Yoda? (underestimated, extra, wise)

Amris...this elf...is too smart for his own good. He knows something about everything and is always ready with some sort of an answer for any question. 



#8 Who’s your Anakin Skywalker?  (bratty, rebellious, whiny)

Eyellyn. This character is a female dwarf who is somewhat the guardian and parent figure to her younger siblings. She can be extremely grumpy, rebellious, and isn't much for giving her companions explanations or information. She doesn't Whine so much as Complain, but you know, it's close enough. 



#9 Who’s your C3-PO? (always worrying, gives depressing information, constantly wailing)

Colderan, definitely! He doesn't MEAN to be a Nervous Nellie, but he has a very soft heart and doesn't want anyone to get hurt. This of course means that warnings come very often from him and he has to make sure that everyone knows the odds. 




#10 Who’s your Luke Skywalker? (hero, has been through a lot, has their share of flaws)

Prince Rhondin!! He is one of my favorite main characters, a young man who....well...he goes through a lot. But somehow he still stays cheerful and bright throughout it all. :) :) 



Bonus #11 which I have made up to add since my answer for #5 was pathetic: Who's your Han Solo? (calls people "kid," has traveled, "I'm making this up as I go" 
planning)

Ateke, who is an elf and a great friend (and brother-in-law) of the aforementioned Lehye'ahl. However, they are totally different personality-wise and it's kind of surprising that they get along...(oh also I've decided that he would be excellent played by Elijah Wood)



Well, that was fun! :D Thank you so much again, Mem!!!! Ah yes, and as far as tagging goes...hmmmmmmmmm....literally anybody who wants to do this tag. If you own a toy lightsaber, consider yourself tagged!!!!! 



Saturday, December 15, 2018

Introducing...the Characters that Fill My Brain, Part 5: King Colderan


Well, that's what I've been doing, folks. Although I suppose I DO have an excuse! The semester was wrapping up for me over these past couple weeks, and today I officially finished my last final of the fall 2018 semester! Phew! Anyway, it's nice to have that done. I haven't been as "in-tune" with the blogging world because of that, but over the break there are a couple tag posts that I need to get done, and I hope to have more time for reading and commenting too! 

But, back to the subject. Today is the last day of my character post series, wrapping up with the last (and chronologically oldest) of the main characters. I really like this guy--he's so nice...but anyway, here it is! I would like to introduce you to King Colderan! 


Age: 
Depends on which book you're reading. In his "solo" book, (wherein he is the main character), he is mainly in his mid/late twenties. In later books, he is older, and by the time of my main trilogy, he has been long dead. (It's not really a spoiler...I mean, even for an elf, that would be really old.) 

Appearance/"Casting": 

His dark hair (now streaked with the smallest tinge of gray) contrasted with his son’s fair locks, and he had soft, gentle brown eyes that sparkled gold in the light.  His back was always straight, his head always high, though not in an arrogant way.  Because of an injury from a year ago, he now walked with a heavy limp, but he didn't complain or seem to pity himself.

As far as "casting" goes, I sort of imagine Colderan (as an older person) to look a little bit like Ben Miles, the actor who portrays Sir Timothy Midwinter in Lark Rise to Candleford. (*Naturally I don't approve of all the stuff that he or any other actor I have mentioned is in, but, setting that aside, I think he looks somewhat like Colderan*)

Family:

A wife and two children (one of which is Lehye'ahl), many siblings who he was never very close to, and parents he was never close to. 

Friends:  

His closest friend, named Amris, is a very intelligent and skilled elf, who is a genius at math and pretty much everything else. Colderan and his wife were also good friends with several people of different races, including a dwarf-girl and a member of the first royal family of Bdellith (this was centuries before Rhondin's time, however). 

Skills (or Un-Skills): 

Colderan is very good with words and is a skilled public speaker, as well as a good writer. He often gets lost in thought, and could be described as a "dreamer." With that personality, he can sometimes drift away and forget what other people are saying, but he never intends to be rude. He can be stubborn and argumentative when he wants, but only about things that are extremely important to him. He is trained to use a sword but he hates it, and he is skilled at horseback riding. Colderan is a problem solver, but unfortunately many problems that he faces are not ones he can solve. He can be overzealous at times in his efforts to comfort people, and, when he was younger, was a bit naive about how to think before speaking. 

"Well, all of those stars are up there—I’m not sure how to say this—but isn’t it amazing that we’re a part of the same world, the same…same universe, I suppose—that every single star is a part of?  No matter how big or important we think we are, there’s always something out there that reminds us that we really aren’t that big after all.” 

Fears:

Losing the ones that he loves. He is terrified of storms at sea (after several awful experiences which I'm not going to tell you about) and hates watching people climb around in the rigging, just in case they happened to fall. 

Loves (or Likes, I suppose): 

Being with his loved ones. Being at peace with all the races in the land and seeing his own people willing to form friendships with others. He loves sweet, warm drinks (especially hot cocoa), and is a huge fan of his friend's mother's chicken dumpling soup. He likes comfortable clothes and being able to slip his shoes off while working in his office, and overall loves it when his people show honest, true care for each other.

Five words/phrases that describe this character's personality 
(to prevent me from rambling any more):

Kind. Gentle. Courageous. Forgiving. Strong-hearted.

“Why must we distrust them?  Why can we not become allies and friends?”  Colderan stood in a small tent, a little spot of shade for working elves that had been appropriated for him and his father to speak in private.
          “They are of different races, Colderan—not just of a different land, they are completely different than us.  I would hesitate even to call them ‘people;’ ‘creatures’ is a more accurate word.”  
          Colderan began to pace heatedly about the tent.  “Father, they are just exactly like us.  They are people as well, every bit as intelligent as we are, though perhaps in different ways.  They simply look a little different—even though they do things rather differently than we do, they're really, on the inside, the same.  I would bet that the dwarves are just the same as us.” 


Songs that remind me of this character 
(for any reason, this does not mean that I necessarily support or agree with the musical group, and nor does it mean that the song is EXACTLY like my character, it may have several lines that are "right" or could just have the right "feel."): 

Burlap to Cashmere: "Closer to the Edge", "Other Country"

The Neal Morse Band: "Breath of Angels"

And Lastly...a collage!




Sunday, November 25, 2018

Introducing...The Characters that Fill My Brain, Part 4: King Lehye'ahl

Ah, now, here we go...after much procrastinating, here is the fourth part of my "character introduction" blog series! Today I shall introduce you to a man--well, elf-man--by the name of Lehye'ahl (pronounced lee-HI-all). Oh, forgive me, it's KING Lehye'ahl. And don't you forget it. But anyway, let us begin! 


Age: 

Hahahaha, very old. He has been around for literally over a hundred years--his father (who I will talk about in the next post) was the elf who was the first real king on their new continent. But enough history lessons. Suffice it to say that Lehye'ahl is very old during the trilogy, although in the prequels that focus on him and his father, he was much younger, even shown as a child. 

Appearance/"Casting": 

Okay, so, quite a while ago, my cousin and I were talking about writing and she said, "Hey, you know that guy in War Horse who dies? Captain Nichols? He looks like the elf-king in your book." At that point, I stared at her in amazement, for she was right! I had no idea who the guy was at that point, but he absolutely looked like Lehye'ahl. So, now I actually know who he is...as you can probably tell from my collages, the *real* person who I think looks most like Lehye'ahl is the actor Tom Hiddleston. (*disclaimer #1*: This is not because, as my brothers might have teased back then, I think he's "hot"...come on, I'm ENGAGED for goodness' sake! It's literally because of that time my cousin pointed it out to me--he looks like Lehye'ahl and might be able to portray him very well. I can appreciate an actor's talents and be shocked that they resemble one of the characters that I made up, before even knowing about them, without being obsessed by them thank you very much *disclaimer #2*: I had not seen any Marvel movies when I realized the uncanny resemblance, and I had written all of Lehye'ahl's story already, so in no ways am I copying Loki--I had all this made up before I even knew Loki existed.)

He certainly hadn’t expected Lehye'ahl to seem so—well, so young. The elf’s silver hair was smooth and long, held back by a silver circlet.  His face held few signs of age, and the several lines and creases upon it seemed to have been carved in stone.  The icy blue eyes were pure and clear, radiating enigmatic intelligence.  Even the man’s posture and expression were intimidating as he sat at his grand desk, fingertips pressed together, elbows leaning on the desk with his posture formidably correct.  He watched them approach without a word, his mouth set in a tight, small frown, though it was hard to tell if he was frowning purposely or not.  Oh, King Lehye’ahl knew very well that he outranked them, and he wasn’t afraid to show it. 

Family:

Lemme just say I have a thing for tragic backstories, okay? This is an important part of Lehye'ahl's character, though. Without what happened with his family years ago, he would not be the person he is in the trilogy. He had a father, mother, brother, wife, and two children, but by the time of the second book in the trilogy, these have all died of mostly tragic causes. (*maniacal laughter*) He has two remaining grandchildren, however, who are good friends with AllynRhondin, and Dehmatthir. Lehye'ahl is very protective of his family, protective to the point of being controlling and demanding. He also blatantly plays favorites with his two grandsons, Esril and Daeor, and likes to make them feel guilty whenever they come short of his idea of perfection. 

“Call him sir,” said Esril.  “Even his grandchildren call him sir.”
            “You haven’t even told us his name yet,” protested Allyn.  
            “His name,” Esril replied, “is Lehye’ahl.  And no, I can’t spell it for you.  But be sure to stick ‘king’ before it if you ever use the actual name.  You know, he actually isn’t such a bad guy usually.”
            “What with being overbearing and all,” said Allyn, raising an eyebrow. 
            “No, really, he can be reasonable when he wants to, he is very smart, and all in all, he’s a good person.  He’s just very critical of outsiders.  A little bit of a racist, I suppose.  
He’s had a rather tragic life in the past, so that explains his grim behavior.”

Friends:  

When he was younger, his wife's brother was Lehye'ahl's good friend. Unfortunately, there was an accident, and after that they sort of stopped talking. His old friend is still alive, but he is confined to his room, which Lehye'ahl doesn't like to think about (sadly, interacting with disabled people makes him uncomfortable), so they never see each other or talk any more. However, his friend's son is Lehye'ahl's office assistant, taking over his father's place. They are not nearly as close as the first two were, though. 

Skills (or Un-Skills): 

Lehye'ahl has a way with words and knows how to use them to his advantage. He is an amazing swordsman, in his own style, and is also good at hand-to-hand combat; he likes to punch things (and people, when he gets the excuse to). He is good at controlling people, but he is a decent king and, for the most part, is good to his people and his country. He was an avid reader in his youth and is very intelligent as well. He can't cook to save his life, however, and as far as practical manual labor goes, he is somewhat inexperienced.

The dwarf-king’s mouth twitched.  
“Those who do not admit to tricking their enemies are the ones who most often do,” he said.
          “Those who do admit to tricking their enemies have no qualms about it and will certainly do it again without hesitation,” said Lehye’ahl. 
            
Fears:

Not much. He isn't really "scared" of anything. (Or if he is, he doesn't let anyone, ANYONE, know that he is.) I guess I could include his weaknesses here, instead of "fears." He can be very cruel and mean at times, but underneath it all he is very lonely and he misses his family; all the people that he has lost. He doesn't allow anyone under that tough skin, which could be a part of his grieving process or whatever, but is certainly not good for his emotional/mental state. He HATES dwarves, absolutely hates them, after a really unfortunate misunderstanding between him and a previous king of the dwarves back when he was younger. That led to him cursing their entire race, and...well, suffice it to say that ever since they caused him such pain and personal trouble, he has grown to despise anyone who thinks differently than him and has the courage to speak up about it. 

“I hate you.  I hate you and all your offspring, and every dwarf who has sat here listening to you and letting me die.  I will never come to terms with you, and so help me I will wipe your race from the land forever."

Loves (or Likes, I suppose): 

To have his own way. Obedience. Having the last word in an argument. Perfect new quill pens and unwrinkled paper. His family, in his own weird and awful way. Himself and his ego.

Five words/phrases that describe this character's personality 
(to prevent me from rambling any more):

Stern. Controlling. Over-protective. Refined. Selfish. 

Songs that remind me of this character 
(for any reason, this does not mean that I necessarily support or agree with the musical group, and nor does it mean that the song is EXACTLY like my character, it may have several lines that are "right" or could just have the right "feel."): 





(I apologize cause this is a really odd and quirky video, but the song fits)

And Lastly...a collage!




Tuesday, October 30, 2018

Introducing...The Characters that Fill My Brain, Part 3: Dehmatthir

Hello there everyone! Well, it's about that time...time for another one of my character posts! :D (Honestly I think these are more helpful for me than they are interesting for you...it is really much more helpful than I thought it would be to get all my thoughts together in one place about these people.) Today I shall introduce you to a man named Dehmatthir (yes, I know it's weird. It's pronounced dem-AH-teer) and...well, yes. That's about it. 


Age: 

During the main trilogy (which is the only "era" of him we are dealing with, though I wrote a prequel about him too), he is in his mid-forties, I believe. 

Appearance/"Casting": 

Dehmatthir is a very grim, solid sort of man. He is tall, but not exceedingly over average height. He has dark brown/auburn (but mostly brown) hair that is usually long and unkempt, and a short beard that he really SHOULD take better care of. He is often dirty and sweaty, and values physical, manual labor--it takes his mind off other things. He hardly ever smiles (which I will explain), and always dresses practically, almost always with his sword at his side. I haven't found anyone who really looks like him...yet. But I'm sure there's someone...I mean, a dude with dark hair and a beard...and blue eyes...how hard can it be to find someone who looks like that? 

Family:

So, Dehmatthir was orphaned as an infant and taken in by an old wizard named Lanas. He has lived at the castle of Bdellith ever since, and the wizard sort of became his guardian and mentor. At the time of the trilogy, he has no family other than Lanas, and he can't even remember. He was, for several years, a captive of "the bad guy" and was rescued, brought back to his home, but still suffers some side effects, one of which is a bit of amnesia. So he really doesn't remember much. Did he ever know who his family was? He couldn't say. 

“What do you think about our plans, Dehmatthir?” 
            “They’re wonderful, except for the minor detail that we don’t know what one we will use, 
or as the case may be, which ones we will have to use.”  Dehmatthir said derisively.

Friends:  

Naturally, Lanas, the wizard, is his oldest friend, more of a father figure to him. He is also good friends with Darith, the king of Bdellith, as well as the captain of the Bdellith army. The three of them have always been friends, since childhood. Dehmatthir is not exactly a "friend" of Rhondin and Allyn, but he would secretly do anything for them. To Allyn, he is a strong (albeit sad) father figure, since she never had a dad, just her grandpa. To Rhondin he's more like an older brother or an uncle. 

“I’m not insane,” Dehmatthir said.  “I promise.  
And I will not do anything to harm you, 
cross my heart, hope to die and get run over by William Shakespeare driving a pickup truck 
wearing lederhosen and singing ‘Don’t Stop Believin’.”
            Allyn blinked.  “Wha—Shakespeare?  Who’s wearing lederhosen, him or the truck?”  

Skills (or Un-Skills): 

Dehmatthir is an insanely talented swordsman and, overall, a good fighter. He has honed his skills since childhood and, after the amnesia, that is all that he really remembered how to do. So he kept doing it. He's an excellent horseman, a great practical joker, and a decent cook. He's really bad at cleaning things or keeping things clean, though. He's also very sarcastic and can seem bitter, but never really means his friends any harm. He wouldn't hesitate to put himself in danger or even die for one of his friends' sake.

The wizard snorted.  “I,” he said, “have just been fighting practically all night, 
have not had any sleep at all, and been given numerous minor wounds.  I feel wonderful!"  

Fears:

Himself. He is always afraid that he will lose more of his memory; that he will wake up tomorrow and even what he does remember will be gone. He fears the death or injury of his friends, and he is terrified of bugs (especially bees, spiders, and centipedes). 

Oh, bother,” said Rhondin. 
            Dehmatthir continued dragging him along rather noisily, grumbling under his breath.   
He burst through the door to their room with a shout of, “ALLYN!”
            She yelped, startled, and jumped up as he approached, 
the prince protesting as his ear was yanked.  “What?”
            “Did you take any part in this?”
            “Well, Rhondin—OW!”  
Dehmatthir had grasped her ear as well, in his other hand, glaring down at both of them.

Loves (or Likes, I suppose): 

The healthy smell of sweat and dirt and good honest work. His sword in his hands and the comforting weight of it at his side. Black coffee. Pretty much any kind of food, but especially food cooked out in the wild over a fire. Moments when he forgets that he has lost his memory; when he is so distracted that he almost forgets his troubles. He loves to spend time with his friends, even though he might not seem like it. He also loves it when Allyn gets the better of Rhondin, and encourages her very much. 

Five words/phrases that describe this character's personality 
(to prevent me from rambling any more):

Strong, sarcastic, grim, angry, willing to sacrifice.

Songs that remind me of this character 
(for any reason, this does not mean that I necessarily support or agree with the musical group): 





And Lastly...a collage!





Monday, October 22, 2018

Introducing...The Characters that Fill My Brain, Part 2: Prince Rhondin

Can you believe it's October 22 already??? I can't...I mean, a few days ago (it seems) the school year was starting and now I have just finished up with my midterm exams! How is that even possible? 

Anyway. That's beside the point, but still a valid topic of conversation...but today's topic is the second part of my blog series about my books' main-ish characters! Today, I shall endeavor to introduce you to Prince Rhondin (if I can find him, he might have run off somewhere to find a snack).


Age: 

In the first book, the prince (I ALWAYS call him "the prince," so get used to it) is sixteen. At the very end of everything, I believe he is nineteen. He matures more in character than in age, though--at the beginning he is, I will admit, a rather bratty, entitled young man, but when certain *things* happen, over time, he gets much better. He would never dream of putting himself before his friends and his people in the end. 

Appearance/"Casting": 

"...short, unruly hair that looked like it couldn't decide 
whether it was dark blond or light brown, 
but was starting to tend more toward brown.  
He had gray-brown eyes that almost gave an air of innocence...
his jaw was angular and square, and he had a sort of pointy nose."

Of course that was in the very beginning when he was still quite young. He got taller over the three years of the trilogy, and yes, his hair finally decides to be brown. As far as "casting" goes, I have not found a single person on this earth that looks like Rhondin. 

Family:

Well, of course, his father is the king of their country, and his mother is the queen. He doesn't have any siblings, but he does have an uncle, the king's brother. Now, Rhondin's uncle is named Nevl, and he is actually the king of the northern half of their country. You see, the country (which is called Bdellith, which is an awful name but I love the place) was split peacefully into two portions, the north and the south, and each brother rules one half of the collective country, though they are essentially two different places. 

Rhondin nodded thoughtfully.  “Yeah, that sounds like Uncle Nevl.
  Be careful with him—if he ever offers you coffee, don’t.”
          “Don’t what?”
          “Just don’t.  You know, elephants and all.  It doesn’t go.”
          “Elephants?  Go where?” 

Friends: 

For one, Allyn, who was introduced in the last post.  They get along pretty well, at least, they do once they stop hating each other. They still nag at each other and really, really annoy each other quite often, and there's a lot of teasing, but they're still good friends. Rhondin doesn't have any siblings, so he enjoys having a friend who isn't intimidated by his position as a prince. He is also friends with his country's captain of the guard, who is sort of like an uncle to him, and several other soldiers or servants in the castle. Oh, and of course, how could I forget! He is also a good friend of a man named Dehmatthir (yes I know it's hard to pronounce: here: dem-AH-teer), who has been around for a long time (more on him next week though). They have a lot of fun. 

“You woke up!” yelled Rhondin.
          Dehmatthir raised an eyebrow at him.  
“Thank you for stating the blindingly obvious.”

Rhondin finally got up to join them, stuffing a piece of bread into his mouth as he went. 
He chewed and swallowed as quickly as possible, and then immediately hiccuped. "Aw, come on!" 
Dehmatthir and Allyn turned and looked at him.
"That's what you get," said Dehmatthir. 
They turned back to the window.

Skills (or Un-Skills): 

Rhondin is a pretty good swordsman, especially for his age. He's also a good rider, has a decent singing voice, is a great dancer, and is generally good with animals. He tends to be a little clumsy sometimes, and is horrible at keeping a straight face, but he's great at hiding, climbing, and generally is a very active person. He can't cook at all, but he's great at snitching snacks from the castle kitchen. He also isn't the greatest at small talk, but is always good at lifting people's spirits and lightening the mood of their situations. 

Fears:

Heights, or rather, falling from them. He's terrified of girls (well, to some extent...he would say that he's scared of "girly" girls), and even the smallest mention of anything romantic disgusts him (though maybe that's a "dislike" not a "fear"). He also has some fear of responsibility, growing up watching his father rule the kingdom--it's a huge responsibility that he's sure he'll never be ready for. 

Loves (or Likes, I suppose): 

Good food in abundance (particularly cookies and other sweets), lively music, a casual dance, teasing in good fun, his horse, laughing so hard that he can't breathe, the feeling of victory, not brushing his hair in the morning, sleeping in, knowing that his parents (particularly his father) are proud of him. 

Five words/phrases that describe this character's personality 
(to prevent me from rambling any more):

Loyal, cheerful, easygoing, brave, never gives up.

Songs that remind me of this character 
(for any reason, this does not mean that I necessarily support or agree with the musical group, and nor does it mean that the song is EXACTLY like my character, it may have several lines that are "right" or could just have the right "feel."): 





And Lastly...a collage!




Monday, October 15, 2018

Introducing...The Characters that Fill My Brain, Part 1: Allyn

Well, it's been a while since I actually (*cough*) posted anything much aside from some poetry bits and that sort of thing. So, I decided that it is time to start something. I have been mulling about this post series idea for several weeks now and it's finally gonna happen, folks! I plan to have a series of weekly/bi-weekly posts about different main to semi-main characters in my books, just by way of "introductions" to these people, as well as a place for me to assemble my ideas of pictures, music, and other inspirations that I have for these characters. I'm not sure exactly how many of these posts there will be, but there will be probably 6 to 10...thereabouts.

Anyhoo, here we go, embarking on the first one!  (Total Side Note: at first, I was reluctant to do this because I was all like "But WhAT iF sOMeOne StEaLS mY IdEaS?" and then I realized: Uhhh, they won't. It's not like the whole world reads my blog after all. Plus, if anyone did, I have all the background info anyway, but that's beside the point.) Here we go! *All the pictures I use are taken from either Pinterest, Unsplash, or my own personal photos...see "disclaimer" page

The first character I would like to introduce to you is the main character of my trilogy, the first main character that I really wrote, and her name is Allyn Turner.


Since I am a very rambly person, I decided that I had better make categories of characteristics that I can fill in for everyone! 

Age: 

Allyn is 15 at the beginning of the trilogy, though she could be considered to be very "mature" in her behavior for being fifteen years old. She is 18 at the end of the trilogy, all grown up...*sniffs*

Appearance/"Casting": 

So originally Allyn was based off of my appearance, but that was back when I was, well, younger and her character was less developed. As I grew up, she grew less like me, I think, and, though of course she probably looks "similar," with curly brown hair and brown eyes, she doesn't look quite like me, not her face. I have not been able to find any real person who actually looks like how I envision Allyn (which is why I only use pictures that are from the back or almost-side). She is often either raising or furrowing her eyebrows, for whatever reason. She is of very average height and build...and is, I guess you could say, just your average sort of girl. 

Family:

Allyn was adopted by a single woman, a quirky chemistry professor, who wasn't married but decided, "Hey, who's to stop me from adopting a daughter?" She had always wanted a daughter, but had never married, so...there you go. Allyn's childhood was spent living with her mother, Elisabeth Turner, and with her grandfather, Thomas Turner, a widower who had only one child. The three of them live quite comfortably together, and they are happy--Allyn doesn't have any difficulty with the fact that she was adopted; in fact, she doesn't mind at all. Thomas and Elisabeth Turner--her grandpa and mother--are, in her eyes, just the same as a biological family would feel. 

Friends:  

In OUR world, which is where the Turners live, Allyn doesn't have any "particular friends." She has friends, acquaintances and such from school, people she gets along with well and enjoys their company, but it wasn't until the time that her first adventure happened that she began to have very good friends. Probably her best friend is Prince Rhondin (who I promise I will do a post about next), despite their...well, they banter a lot, but in the end they are such good friends that they would never dream of hurting each other.

Allyn held up a hand to high-five him. “At least we survived!”
            The prince stared blankly at her.  “Uh…what are you doing?”
            “In my world, when people are glad or win something, they do high-fives.  
You would just hit my hand, like it’s two people clapping instead of one.”
            “Oh.” Looking sheepish, he raised a hand and whacked hers nice and hard. 
Then he grinned.  “Hey, that’s fun!”

“Oh, so you think it’s so funny, do you, Allyn?”  
Then he did a double take.  
“ALLYN?  WHAT—HOW—WHO—WHY—WHEN—
WHERE BY NEVL’S PANTS DID YOU COME FROM?”
“Hello Rhondin,” Allyn replied, grinning in satisfaction. 



Skills (or Un-Skills): 

Allyn is a pretty good archer, or at least, she is once she is trained...she has a good eye for shooting and depth perception, and is an excellent rider (on horseback) as well. She is also a strong swimmer and loves the water. She isn't a very good dancer, but she would like to learn, and, while she isn't the best at handling a sword, she can handle one in a pinch. She is also good with computers, but of course, on her adventures, there really aren't any computers...

Fears:

Strangers, being alone in dark corridors, getting lost, being stuck in a fight without help, Elisabeth worrying about her, her grandpa's health declining. 

Loves (or Likes, I suppose): 

Music! (She has an eclectic collection.) Horses. Comfortable, flexible clothing, Pop-tarts and any sort of pastry, strawberries, extra ponytail holders, archery, reading, waking up before her alarm sounds, the beach, small downtown streets, coffee with sugar and cream, and lots more...

Five words/phrases that describe this character's personality 
(to prevent me from rambling any more):

Loyal, adventurous, willing to try her best, curious, feels "at home" when she is with her loved ones, not at a physical place.

Songs that remind me of this character 
(for any reason, this does not mean that I necessarily support or agree with the musical group): 








And Lastly...a collage!